The Rocking Is All Done
by Desperado

Comment by Desperado:
I thank you for your comments. I wanted to offset the subject a bit but there was something off to the right that would have messed it up. I will keep that in mind for next time around though. Thank you again.

The Rocking Is All Done
by Desperado

Comment by ELLIPS:
Nice subject, with 2 flaws in my opinion: composition completely centered, and subject not clearly standing out against the background. More DOF and/or to increase the contrast would help.

The Rocking Is All Done
by Desperado

Comment by JAMMM3:
this is really creative.
with out a thought this is something that i have never really seen.
good job!

The Rocking Is All Done
by Desperado

Comment by popdeepop:
Centered.

The Rocking Is All Done
by Desperado

Comment by ThingFish:
WOW!!! This shot ROCKS. One of the best in the challenge and fits the theme like a glove. It really is the end.

The Rocking Is All Done
by Desperado

Comment by Pikkel:
I really like this too bad we can't do layering I'd love to see this with a couple of the leaves with color

Pier in Winter
by Desperado

Comment by timwest167:
Interesting perspective and composition. The sea lacks detail/texture though.

Cowards
by Desperado

Comment by Desperado:
I'm new to the photography field so I do appreciate the advice. Well, for those who lent some advice to the shot. I don't know who put the paint on the wall but I would consider that alone to be pollution. I can see the need for more brick, that would have looked better I think. Too much negative space at the top...yep I agree. I submitted this picture so that I could get some helpful hints as to how to better myself in the field. So again, for those of you who offered some constructive criticism I thank you.

Cowards
by Desperado

Comment by antares1966:
I think this might have had more impact if you pulled back just a little bit, show more of the wall

Cowards
by Desperado

Comment by TeamZissou:
Good message -- gotta love positive pollution. As for the composition, I think it would look better with a good portion of the top cropped off, and I'd like to see more of the brick wall on the right.