Flocking around the bridge
by kyrielle

Comment by Simplicity:
wow, that's alot of birds...nice capture of their action.

Flocking around the bridge
by kyrielle

Comment by bod:
Way too random for me. Where's the focal point? What is there to draw the viewer into looking at the shot more closely? Had you been stood on the bridge with the birds flying towards you I think you may have got a much more engaging shot.

Flocking around the bridge
by kyrielle

Comment by Spork99:
Good shot, but the structure and vehicle (whatever that yellow thing is) on the right distract me from the birds. I think this would be much better if the right side was cropped.

Flocking around the bridge
by kyrielle

Comment by BobsterLobster:
Far too much sharpening, you can see artifacting around all the pigeons as a result. Could do with a bit more saturation. Copmposition seems a bit chaotic. 5

Looking Out
by kyrielle

Comment by dr rick:
There is certainly repetition, and the boards are interestingly different from each other, but the focused background is even more interesting and steals the viewers attention away. A shallow depth of field to knock the background out of focus would have helped prevent this.

Looking Out
by kyrielle

Comment by MikeO:
You have taken a 'simple' idea and made it work very well

Looking Out
by kyrielle

Comment by ellamay:
Well i like this idea, but needs something slightly more 'wow' either in the foreground or background.

Looking Out
by kyrielle

Comment by FranziskaLang:
Challenge met. To be honest, besides meeting the challenge, I am not sure there's much that holds my interest in this image. It's in focus, maybe a little dark, but not very inspiring to me. Sorry.

Looking Out
by kyrielle

Comment by KevinRiggs:
Very active background and the tree trunks/limbs towards the top of the image break the cohesion of the greenery. I'd prefer to see a smaller selection of this like the bottom lefthand corner - from the side to the center pole and only about half the image height. That way you'd get good solid greenery. Just my preference.

The Subjects At Hand
by kyrielle

Comment by ellamay:
That was the exact spanish text I had I think 20 yrs ago!! weird!