April Wishes
by reneekerr

Comment by jomari:
This is really lovely.

Points of Color
by reneekerr

Comment by jomari:
lovely shot.

Journey in time
by reneekerr

Comment by geinafets:
It looks like his one might have been handhold, which caused some camera shake. If you had used a tripod and/or sharpened more, the blur of the turning pages would have stood out more, emphasizing the passing of time.

The light also doesn't suit this very well. There is a bright spot in the upper right of the frame, which draws the eye because it is the lightest part of the image. The title and the weathered look of the book make me wish you had gone further with the "old" feel of the image, maybe by lighting it with a candle or some other more "dramatic" type lighting.

Points of Color
by reneekerr

Comment by DJWoodward:
Challenge Relevance:5.5 Impact/Emotion/Mood:4 Technicals:4 Processing:4 Creativity:4

Journey in time
by reneekerr

Comment by giantmike:
I like the idea here. I think it would have worked slightly better for me if the book cover was in focus, and just the pages had motion blur.

Points of Color
by reneekerr

Comment by JustCaree:
love the backwards shot.

When The Wind Blows
by reneekerr

Comment by SoulJance:
I think that the square crop suite this type of shot really well. I don't know where to look in your show as it is hard to determine the focus point is there is a lot of white on white detail which is hard to see, maybe mono is not the best choice here. Of course if you are going for an emotive feel then I think you need some movement in the shot.

April Wishes
by reneekerr

Comment by tanguera:
This is so lovely

Natures Double Exposure
by reneekerr

Comment by graphicfunk:
Well, at least you have a nice image to hang on the wall.

Natures Double Exposure
by reneekerr

Comment by blad:
this is a dandy one. maybe some more contrast?