Seeing the world different
by photobyjewell

Comment by kcet0910:
imho, a shallower DOF would have probably made this better

Motion
by photobyjewell

Comment by Yo_Spiff:
I'm sure you have already been told it is too small, but there is also way too much compression. At only 26k in file size, the jpeg compression is killing a lot of detail on you. Always use the least compression that you can and make it under the file size limit for the challenge.

Motion
by photobyjewell

Comment by photomill31:
Nice set up, but you lost too much detail in the re-size? Not a bad effort but a little short...

Motion
by photobyjewell

Comment by Spizzer:
Would be better if it were larger...use the full size they allow. Also, a slow shutter speed would show the motion and make it more interesting.

Motion
by photobyjewell

Comment by rlewis:
Use all of your pixels

Motion
by photobyjewell

Comment by MsAmbrosia:
It's a bit small and the colours are a little drab.

Motion
by photobyjewell

Comment by PNH:
Image needs larger size for contest entry.

Motion
by photobyjewell

Comment by bmilne:
you really should have a sharpen and larger image

Atlanta Sky Line through My Eyes
by photobyjewell

Comment by jeger:
Greetings from the Critique Club...

I was not able to vote on this challenge, but if I had, I probably would have given you a 4.

One of the most difficult aspects of this website is submitting a photograph that clearly conveys the theme of the challenge. The reason your photograph did not score well was because the viewers were not able to figure out the "before & after". While you may know what the message is, you have to understand that it is your job as a photographer to get the message across to the viewers. If you browse through the entries that faired a little better, you will see that most of them have 2 distinct aspects to them. This is the main difference between your photo, and the rest.

Good luck with your future challenge entries.

If you need any clarification on any of my comments, please feel free to pm me. It might take some time for me to get back to you.

Atlanta Sky Line through My Eyes
by photobyjewell

Comment by Rainbow-Coloured-Soul:
I'm not sure what your message is here. Before and after?