P&S Day 4: Jess
by socalsteve

Comment by Jutilda:
From a woman's perspective, I think it is a bit harsh. The lighting seems slightly yellow, but maybe that's just my monitor. I might soften her facial features (around the eyes) just a smidge - not enough to make it look fake, but to make it more flattering. I like the pose. I might have included more of her arms at the bottom. I'm no expert, but that's my take on it. ;~)

P&S Day 4: Jess
by socalsteve

Comment by Retroesque:
She's lovely.

I'm wondering if the pose doesn't suit her age a bit - it's a little 'cutesy'. Not sure how old she is, but her eye creases seem to indicate she's older.

Additionally don't fancy the cut off arms.

P&S Day 3: Jess
by socalsteve

Comment by Retroesque:
Lovely model - think the catchlights in her eyes could be better.

P&S Day 4: Jess
by socalsteve

Comment by ShutterPug:
Lighting is much better here. The pose looks a bit awkward and those stray hairs are still distracting.

P&S Day 3: Jess
by socalsteve

Comment by ShutterPug:
C&C: clone out the stray hairs, darken the background to make it look black. Not sure what can be done pp for the harsh lighting on the one eye. The shadow separating the sweater and the breast is very distracting to me.
The model pose is very relaxed looking. Expression and smile are pleasant.

P&S Day 4: Jess
by socalsteve

Comment by liberty:
Nice lighting on this one, pose is okay, I think there is too much depth from her head to her legs, maybe its they way she's laying. Nice portrait all around, nice quality.

P&S Day 3: Jess
by socalsteve

Comment by liberty:
Everythings great, but the lighting is a little too bright, not to be nit picky, but she may want to try a hair smoothing cream. The composition and everything else is very nice. Good work.

P&S Day 4: Jess
by socalsteve

Comment by BeckyT:
I really like this one. The light isn't as harsh. Your are improving fast. Wonderful. Great pose.

P&S Day 3: Jess
by socalsteve

Comment by BeckyT:
Awesome job on your first photo shoot. Way to go.

P&S Day 3: Jess
by socalsteve

Comment by photokariangel:
Also here to C&c, but all i have to say is what the first poster said, the lighting is harsh on her left side, thus the white eye. And having the background pushed all the way to pure black would help too. Flyway hairs, and the boob breast issue would have to be resovled. other then that, beautiful women, and a great smile she has