P&S Day 12: Naomi III
by socalsteve

Comment by patio127:
I think the pose could be more relaxed in this one- her bum is pushed up in the air too much- just me...really very well done & I know it's difficult to do tasteful nudes.

P&S Day 13: Naomi IV
by socalsteve

Comment by patio127:
Provocative- like it in B&W. Not sure I like the top of her head missing :)

Airworthy But Caged
by socalsteve

Comment by tonyv:
I like the cleanness and crisp lines of this image.

Airworthy But Caged
by socalsteve

Comment by andrewt:
Too much contrast IMO , Try toning it down by post processing.

P&S Day 11: Naomi II
by socalsteve

Comment by Retroesque:
I'm gonna go with harsh lighting again. Good pose, she's lovely and has a great look. Skin seems a bit orangey!

P&S Day 10: Naomi
by socalsteve

Comment by Retroesque:
Good pose for your subject. The lighting seems a bit harsh on her face.

P&S Day 9: Jess VII
by socalsteve

Comment by Retroesque:
Steve, don't know why but the front arm from the elbow up looks really hairy and dark. I think the lighting is a bit harsh.

P&S Day 11: Naomi II
by socalsteve

Comment by Art Roflmao:
I like this one a lot! Her expression is great. My only minor nits would be the bright spot on her bicep - could use less lighting there - and the background could be darker. Keep in mind - those are REALLY minor nitpicks - I'm happy with it the way it is as well!

P&S Day 10: Naomi
by socalsteve

Comment by Art Roflmao:
I think the lighting is great! Took me a few minutes to start liking the pose - my first impression made me feel like I was a cop and she is a perp. That's just my twisted mind though. :) I think I would remove the straps. Not that I want to see her naked. er, well, not that I don't either - I just mean the straps detract a little.

Major improvements as you progress though, Steve! I'm interested to see how you will be able to keep the beautiful models coming. ...no really, I wanna know your secret! :P

P&S Day 12: Naomi III
by socalsteve

Comment by sherpet:
Beautiful.....