Lazy on a Sunday Afternoon
by Tiberius

Comment by carlacryptic:
great portraits! - 8

Intimate Chaos
by Tiberius

Comment by ccraft:
Love the balance and composition. Nice colours and lighting. Nice to see someone who shot something "messy" but still chose to place things so there is a definite subject - and a place for the eye to move.n Great job!

Lazy on a Sunday Afternoon
by Tiberius

Comment by Mona:
I love it.

Lazy on a Sunday Afternoon
by Tiberius

Comment by obstetrify:
Tis is a good 'snapshot', as opposed to a 'photograph'. I sppose there is a difference. Perhaps the condition could be that the subject of a snapshot should not know that they are being photographed. I think this is the case here, and all the better for it.

Lazy on a Sunday Afternoon
by Tiberius

Comment by rll07:
stop lookin' at those bikinis!! lol cute shot hard to keep the boys foot in and not the above item but not sure

Lazy on a Sunday Afternoon
by Tiberius

Comment by pitsaman:
White parts blown out, maybe rule of thirds will improve the composition,6 !

Lazy on a Sunday Afternoon
by Tiberius

Comment by ccraft:
Love the personality in this shot. WEll composed.

Lazy on a Sunday Afternoon
by Tiberius

Comment by BobsterLobster:
Interesting shot... perhaps a little too like a snapshot. Slight overexposure resulting in burnt out highlights. The boy doesn't seem to be very sharp, and there is bad artifacting everywhere, possibly as a result of applying sharpening in PS to a photo that wasn't too sharp to start with. This particularly affects the texture of sand. Perhaps a little too much red overall. I think the main problem with this shot for me is that the viewer's eye is pulled in different directions. The two subjects are both looking out of the frame in different directions so there is no clear point of focus.

Portrait
by Tiberius

Comment by jmsetzler:
Greetings from the Critique Club...

Hi Tiberius...

This is a rather nice portrait. The composition is good and I particularly like the softness of it. Her eye direction is nice because it makes me wonder what she is looking at.

The only part that bothers me about this image is the gray in her hair and in the background. This may have come from color desaturation, but I'm not sure...

John Setler

She Took The Music From Soul ...And TheCDs My Rack
by Tiberius

Comment by Klauss:
Very hot silhouette! Indeed there are so many times when we overlook beautiful things, in our hurry to ... nowhere.
This is a wonderful example of how much beauty lies around us...
Great idea, very, very good composition with the shadow! The contrast between the black contour and the red hot background, makes it so valuable!
Good job, my friend! ;)