Is it over?
by Tiberius

Comment by e301:
I like the fact that the solitary umberella wielder is also facing the opposite way from his fellows, though compositionally it's a great pity that the man behind him is by far the most eye-catchingly dressed, making it tricky to isolate the little chap visually. had this been my shot, I'm not certain I'd have entered it - or I might have done, expecting no great result - I think that's mostly because of the confusion of impacts around the umberella man: the darkness of him, the creeping of the shape of the umberella into the shape of the hillside, the massive pull to image left of the gaze of the other guys, all make it a conscious effort to keep one's eyes on that sole individual, and weaken the ipact of the image. You get points though for black and white, and for having I think pushed yourself towards at least an interesting idea.

Is it over?
by Tiberius

Comment by Nuzzer:
I like the way the girl with the umbrella is facing away from everyone eles - it seems she is asking 'is it over' not just to the rain but also to the sightseeing :)

Is it over?
by Tiberius

Comment by agenkin:
Can't see any rain here. I see an umbrella, but no rain.

Path
by Tiberius

Comment by SDW:
Nice leading lines photograph but very busy, everything seems to blend together. Almost didn't see the person on the path. It would a made a good "Where's Waldo!" shot.

Path
by Tiberius

Comment by Caltrop:
to make this a more effective Leading Lines photo you could try croping the photo just past the person with the umbrella. That way the path leads us to your subject matter.

Path
by Tiberius

Comment by posthumous:
I love the path. The person is actually obliterating one its nice curves. I'd like her to be more "integrated" into the line of the pathway. Either that or have her stand out more. You can go either way. The path itself, though, and the textures, are terrific. 7

Path
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Comment by goc:
leading line is here ... and the subject is hard to se due coloring

Path
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Comment by xXxscarletxXx:
Oo cute ^_^

Path
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Comment by JulieG:
Nice lines and I like the figure. I wish you could have somehow made her stand out more.

Path
by Tiberius

Comment by skewsme:
Great, but I do kinda wish the subject (person) figured a bit larger.