Nude in the shadowby
AlexysComment by frisca: Ahh.. Alexis! Hello from the Critique Club!
This picture is great, and I'm so pleased to get a chance to comment on it further.
Colour, Composition and Contrast:
Nudes of women were abundant this challenge, I guess its hard to find a willing male model. Too bad for the girls, but I think your nude is one of the most interesting ones.
I like the portrait presentation and the shadow cut against the left side. The repetitive presentation really brings out the theme of the photograph and emphasizes her beautiful curves.
Though its beautiful as it is, one suggestion I offer is trying this same sort of a shot as a full body, or at least, more of her legs, I think with the shadow that would really have some impact. Also, have her take off her ring next time so it doesn't catch the light and reflect it back. Its a odd looking hotspot on her head that is distracting and can be easily avoided. Or you could just clone it out in post-processing.
I would also like to see a greater tonal range here. Basically, more whites and more blacks instead of the narrower range of greys you have currently.
I adore the choice of black and white and think it was the perfect one to make for this shot.
Focus and lighting:
Here is where most of your comments arose. There was a variety of ideas about the lighting and focus, but I think I agree most with the notion that the focus on the subject is just a tiny bit too soft. Its not bad, and I like the softness, but perhaps its the lack of contrast that make this look a little too soft. But as I said..its still very pleasing!
I agree with KevinRigg's comment about the lighting..its not wholly even down her whole body, and maybe an additional light to fill around her legs would have helped? Though I point this out, I don't think its a major flaw at all.
Overall:Fabulous shot and excellent placement in the challenge! I look forward to seeing more of your work. :)
Pam
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