Pasta salad
by hawkida

Comment by Imagineer:
Shot's a bit too gloomy and lacks interest.

Ice Kiss
by hawkida

Comment by Diversq:
<-- Critique Club -->

Here̢۪s the Critique you requested.

The idea of this photo is good but its difficult to figure out what your seeing. The point where the 2 ice cubes are "kissing" is being over shadowed by the blackness of the background and what seems to be another cube to the left.

Perhaps if you pulled back a little farther to show more of the top ice cube that may help. Also if you brightened up the photo all together that might help too.

Good luck on future challenges.

Diversq

Ice Kiss
by hawkida

Comment by Gracious:
There's lots of discoloration and blotches...not terribly creative, the abstractness of it is ok.

Ice Kiss
by hawkida

Comment by marbo:
Meets the challenge ok but not to interesting.

Ice Kiss
by hawkida

Comment by inspzil:
No idea what this is.

Ice Kiss
by hawkida

Comment by adine:
Interesting idea. Took me a while to see what was the ice - the background makes it confusing. I think it would work better if the skin and ice werre seen against an entirely black background, and the spot of the "kiss" was centered or on a "thirds" line.

Beer and Cigarettes
by hawkida

Comment by Stewan:
what is this??

Ice Kiss
by hawkida

Comment by kiwiness:
The idea is good. However, the lighting is a little dark and I would have personally kept it in color.

Beer and Cigarettes
by hawkida

Comment by MarkS224:
You cant fool me ..I know that is breakfast ;) If you could eliminate the streaks it would be better.

Ice Kiss
by hawkida

Comment by fleenk:
even with the title, I can't figure out what this is