Sing Out! ( http://www.singout.org/ )
by eloise

Comment by buck4free:
Shot is much too dark. Guitar is bumping into the breast of the main subject. A yellow-green colorcast from the indoor lighting permeates the shot. Keep these in mind next time...

Sing Out! ( http://www.singout.org/ )
by eloise

Comment by wingy:
Needs better lighting for sure. I think that would help a lot at creating a more crisp shot with clearer more vibrant colors.

Inadvertent Collage
by eloise

Comment by qachyk:
Not sure I agree with your title but I guess I get your point. Anyhow. Yeah, kind of interesting array of stuff, much better than a cubicle shot could've been by a long shot.

Sing Out! ( http://www.singout.org/ )
by eloise

Comment by Fayech:
lighting bad

Sing Out! ( http://www.singout.org/ )
by eloise

Comment by f-32:
I remember Singout magazine so well! This is an excellent shot for that wonderful periodical! (Wish it were the tiniest bit enhanced though! To make it stand out a tetch more...)

Sing Out! ( http://www.singout.org/ )
by eloise

Comment by sagestudio:
The lighting is a bit dark for me, and the photo seems grainy. I can see this as a mag cover for sing out though!

Sing Out! ( http://www.singout.org/ )
by eloise

Comment by chickadee:
Seems a bit dark (even for my monitor). I am quite distracted by everything around the 'singing' subject. Perhaps a closer shot, at a different angle to remove the background guitarist would have been better and more usable as a cover.

Please Stand By
by eloise

Comment by OneSweetSin:
*Critique Club*

This definately meet the challenge as it portrays "White Noise" beyond fitting the challenge there isn't a lot to say about it. I tend to agree with the comments left behind it is just to dark and not all that interesting.

You would have improved greating if the lighting was a little strong and crop in more on just the picture from the tv.

I did read your comment and I know the feeling too it just sucks to not have a submission! You did a pretty good critique of it too. Nice try on a last minute attempt and as someone said in the comments...nice experiment. I agree cause it could work if it weren't so dark.

Anna

Sing Out! ( http://www.singout.org/ )
by eloise

Comment by Pidd:
This is very dark.

Inadvertent Collage
by eloise

Comment by wewillexplore:
Interesting clutter. lol Looks a bit too much for me. But great job meeting the challenge!