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greenem2Comment by HBunch: *Critique Club*
Since this loads from top to bottom, the very first thing I saw come up was yellow and green. I think that the dark area in the middle almost hogs the spotlight. I really like the yellow and red, and I think that had you been able to avoid the blue/yellow turning into the green, and all the colors clashing to make the dark area in the center, this would be really really appealing to me.
I'm not generally a fan of abstract, however, I am a fan of color. For the challenge, I think that I would like to have seen more of the blue. However, I really like the green in the shot outside the challenge.
There are some horizontal marks near the bottom of the photo that look like a printout where the printer was running out of ink. Is this some kind of glare from the container you mixed this in? Not a huge deal, but being such strong lines, it stands out from the flowing swirl of the rest of the shot.
Focus and clarity look good, and lighting looks good as well. My only big hang up is the dark area in the middle. I'd like to see more brightness to go with that beautiful yellow.
~Heather~