Topography
by Tvetting

Comment by glad2badad:
Hmmm. Yes, there's an 'S' shaped curve (two of them) in this photo. And while it technically fits the challenge, I find the image to be a bit static. Nothing to say "Wow" about it. If you had used different colors maybe? Anyway...good luck in the challenge.

Topography
by Tvetting

Comment by treimee:
Good idea for a photo. However, I would like to see more contrast. There is too much grey and not enough true blacks and whites.

Shelby's Pride
by Tvetting

Comment by atupdate:
Hello from the Critique Club,

First let me congratulate you a new personal best score. I know you were probably hoping for a little higher but your score indicates that the image was technically strong and meet the challenge description. Where the image falls short is in the DPC "Wow" factor. Nearly 40% of your votes were 5's. That to me suggests that the voters looked for literally 2-3 seconds and concluded, "this picture isn't bad, so I can't give 4 or less, but it doesn't do that much for me so I can't give 6 or more".

You did a nice job trying to eliminate distractions in this image. However, the cars visible on both sides of the Shelby indicate that your image was taken at a car show of some sort. This gives the image a walk-by-shooting look that lacks the creativity that the DPC voters look for.

Feel free to send me a PM if you have any questions regarding this critique.

Tim

Topography
by Tvetting

Comment by JuliBoc:
Cool pattern and good curve. It doesn't lead my eye anywhere except out of the image.

Topography
by Tvetting

Comment by sulamk:
First Impression: a nice minimalistic image.
Presentation: good
What I Like: the almost abstract feeling
What I donĂ¢€™t Like: it is somewhat soft
IMO, Does it meet the Challenge : yes

Composition: good
Background :i think i would have liked a whiter background to contrast
Subject Placement: good
Cropping: fair
Focus: A bit too soft
Exposure: a little underexposed I feel
Editing: fair

Total Averaged Rating : 6

Topography
by Tvetting

Comment by riversong:
Different and original. Nice contrast, but I'm not too sure what it means.

Topography
by Tvetting

Comment by brentaugusuts:
I cant find a solid detailed focus..

Shelby's Pride
by Tvetting

Comment by staticoy:
is this a replica kit car?

Shelby's Pride
by Tvetting

Comment by CVette:
Nice perspective. I know Shelbys typically are blue but I think a change to red or another color would help contrast it with the sky.

Shelby's Pride
by Tvetting

Comment by halfnelson:
The Shadow is off a little.