Birth of Chocolate
by karmat

Comment by trnqlty:
The background has a slight yellow hue to it. Perhaps a little bump in brightness would do the trick

Birth of Chocolate
by karmat

Comment by kdeleon:
cool take on the challenge...a bit too grainy and out of focus.

Fork Play
by karmat

Comment by davidspyle:
Very clever! Like it alot.
Perhaps a reshoot utilizing the technique for "Spoon" by Keith the Maniac in the Metal Challenge would provide the sensuous and sensual quality and level that you may have intended.

Birth of Chocolate
by karmat

Comment by ladyhawk22:
Good detail on this shot, and definitely nice and close. I feel like the colors in the shot are a little bit flat. Not sure if that's due to lighting or what. But I feel like if the blue on the wrapper was brighter and the color of the chocolate stood out a bit more, this photo would really pop. I like the composition a lot, with the chocolate over to the side.

Birth of Chocolate
by karmat

Comment by Gallatin:
Beautiful

Birth of Chocolate
by karmat

Comment by HawesPhotoKC:
Pretty good idea, the highlights started to blow out in some areas.
I little more work with your lighting would help the chocolate look more natural as well ( a softbox or diffuser placed just inches over the top with the light close as well often gives me good results)

Birth of Chocolate
by karmat

Comment by Jutilda:
The candy looks dull - like it's been in the frig - maybe I'm the only chocoholic who would notice that. Good detailing and composition.

Birth of Chocolate
by karmat

Comment by SandyP:
I love this one!! The tin foil really adds to the macro element, and the huge lettering on the Kiss tag. But it's a very pleasing photo to look at. No hairy bugs eyes here :) Great job.

Birth of Chocolate
by karmat

Comment by chesire:
Base: 5
Tech: +1
Subj:+2
Chln:

Total: 8
Yum

Birth of Chocolate
by karmat

Comment by cpickett:
Nice idea, but the contrast looks to be too high... Could be a really nice shot. 5