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| 02/25/2003 10:34:20 PM |
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| 02/25/2003 10:09:54 PM |
Untitledby KarenBComment by muckpond: CRITIQUE CLUB!
I hate critiquing photos of people I know -- I'm just sure they're going to get upset. Sorry in advance.
What I like:
I love the ducks in motion -- their trails are really just perfect for this challenge, although it's something I probably wouldn't have thought of. Very enjoyable idea.
What I don't like:
The breaks in the water -- I can't tell what they are. Shallow water around grasses? Sandbars? I don't know. Unfortunately, they detract from the ducks which are the focus. Also, the two ducks going in similar but definitely different directions throws off the "rhythm" of the photo. If I didn't know what the challenge topic was, I'd probably not pick up on rhythm being the theme.
Suggestions:
Maybe zooming in closer on one duck and focusing the frame on his wake? Or, if multiple ducks were the goal, maybe capturing them without the grasses would help the negative space define the wakes so they'd stand out more?
Very nice idea, though. I do think that the wakes were a great interpretation of the topic.
:)
Rob |
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| 02/25/2003 04:23:33 PM |
Georgeby KarenBComment by MajorChaos: hey! anybody can get a shopping cart and look like a homeless guy!!!!
I thought I saw this guy out shooting pictures the other day?
LOL
great shot, a little over contrasted, but the comp is exellent. |
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| 02/25/2003 03:42:29 PM |
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| 02/25/2003 02:12:51 PM |
Search Results: Fitness>Jogging>Menby KarenBComment by dimitrii: This image, in my opinion, should be a second place in this challenge (this is a complement). It is very well composed, has good negative space, mood, and is very general (and even cliche). Exceptional work, congrats a 10! |
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| 02/25/2003 05:36:30 AM |
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| 02/24/2003 08:50:48 PM |
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| 02/24/2003 08:37:41 PM |
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| 02/24/2003 04:31:17 PM |
Georgeby KarenBComment by dsidwell: I like the high contrast and grainy journalistic feel to this; it seems very appropriate. George looks like he's acting. I suspect that this is a friend dressed for the occasion? The composition is also nice with the fence at down right. |
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| 02/24/2003 04:17:36 PM |
Georgeby KarenBComment by alanfreed: Certainly does a great job of capturing the mood of dispair! Seems like the contrast may be just a little exaggerated, but otherwise it's just great. |
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