Soon to be unchained
by indianzfan

Comment by Tranquil:
Where is the focus supposed to be here?

Soon to be unchained
by indianzfan

Comment by bledford:
Lighting is too flat. You would have done well to soften the light and perhaps give it a yellowy hue. Also, there is significant motion blur on the bottom of the left chain and the entire image is generally badly focused. The composition is not so bad. I might have even wanted to see less of the top and bottom of the image (i.e. cropped so just the breasts are in the frame). The rings on the hands (and to an extent the hands themselves) are a distraction to the point being made, which is not altogether very clear to me.

It's really hard to find shoes
by indianzfan

Comment by bobdaveant:
I agree with you, people were way to hard on this picture, it was great and very original..

Soon to be unchained
by indianzfan

Comment by mandyp:
I would like to see this done in black and white - I think the colurs distract from the image a bit. The jewelery takes the focus off the chains a little.

It's really hard to find shoes
by indianzfan

Comment by alisasaur:
i think this should have placed way higher. seriously. i think it's a really good illustration of proportion.

Soon to be unchained
by indianzfan

Comment by thunderbug:
even though this is kinda bad, it is kinda nice too.. and i'm glad to see she has a wedding ring! haha

Soon to be unchained
by indianzfan

Comment by beckettboots:
The focus seems a little soft on the chain and the whiteness of the nail tips is rather distracting from the overall composition as well as the blur at the bottom of the chain.

Soon to be unchained
by indianzfan

Comment by cghubbell:
I think the background washes out the image. The foreground hand is also out of focus, and the chains seem to be lackign in sharpness. The rings are a bit distracting as well; It seems like the focus of the image is the chaining of a body rather than the body's jewelry.

Soon to be unchained
by indianzfan

Comment by Neil:
This was an interesting idea. I think it might have worked better if it were the chain rather than hands hiding the nipples and without the rings. Perhaps the chain would have been wrapped around a few times for better coverage. Also, lighting and focus could be better here.

Soon to be unchained
by indianzfan

Comment by strongheart:
chain movement..slight blur detracts