Pin-Stripped Suit
by ellamay

Comment by drgsoell:
Dramatic contrasts make this a very nice shot.

Flow
by ellamay

Comment by Imagineer:
Beautiful capture - shot is a bit gloomy. Nice touches of colour.

Flow
by ellamay

Comment by casualguy:
Very nice effect with the water, nice composition. Well done, good luck.

Pin-Stripped Suit
by ellamay

Comment by Evil_Munky:
Whoa, nice contrast!

Pin-Stripped Suit
by ellamay

Comment by lightpro1:
Excellent composition

Outcast
by ellamay

Comment by cbeller:
**Critique Club**

Hi Ellamay!

400 shots...wow, you definately did have a very patient subject.

You followed the rule of thirds nicely. The black on black composition is great and the subtle lighting is just enough to seperate the subject from the background on the right. They eyes really grab your attention when you first look at this. You have a nice sharp focus, allowing good detail on the eyes.

Possible improvements:
I think maybe just a little light from the top or top-right would have helped define the top of the head of your subject better.

Overall a nice photo that is pleasing to look at.

-Chris

Flow
by ellamay

Comment by inspzil:
This is a great subject, but its a little too straightforward for my tastes. I'd like to see it at a little bit of an alternative perspective. I think the biggest thing is is that it is taken from too close of a proximity. step back a little and find something that has some interest besides the water. Good thought, just a little bit plain for me.

Pin-Stripped Suit
by ellamay

Comment by tyt2000:
I'm back to comment. Great texture and colors. Lighting is good too.

Keep it up...

Pin-Stripped Suit
by ellamay

Comment by gisele:
i love this!

Outcast
by ellamay

Comment by JC_Homola:
Very moving portrait. fantastic work. 10