PaW 2010 Week 5 reworked.jpg
by Ter

Comment by salmiakki:
Gorgeous light on the buildings Well done

PaW 2010 Week 5 reworked.jpg
by Ter

Comment by hajeka:
I missed the first one, but the buildings are looking magical here.

PaW 2010 Week 6.jpg
by Ter

Comment by sulamk:
very beautiful, like the editing.

PaW 2010 Week 6.jpg
by Ter

Comment by jomari:
Beautiful place and a beautiful shot of it. Care to share the secret of where it is exactly?

PaW 2010 Week 4.jpg
by Ter

Comment by bspurgeon:
Great cottage, seemingly endless subject.

PaW 2010 Week 5 reworked.jpg
by Ter

Comment by bspurgeon:
Peace in a city.

Parer's Pavillion
by Ter

Comment by Ja-9:
IMO this needs a little heavier hand with the USM...just to add more definition to the building and rocks in the background

PaW 2010 Week 5 reworked.jpg
by Ter

Comment by sulamk:
A great improvement on the halo version! Now a lovely serene scene that you can contemplate ithout the distraction.

Still Fruit of Life
by Ter

Comment by Nuzzer:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

First impressions are that the shot is good as it is nicely balanced and the fruit is arranged so as to help the flow of our eye.

Technically the lighting seems a bit harsh (see the hotspots on the fruit) and it is concentrated in an area that is a little too small as it drops off on some of the fruit too soon for my liking. The DOF is large enough but that banana seems a little soft to me.

Artistically I like the choice of background but the widescreen style framing is not a good look here. Often it helps a crop like this but there I think it is too much of a contrast with the shot itself and with a fruit still life, a dramatic contrast is not what is needed.

In summary this is a good shot that has a couple of areas for improvement that held it back.

Feel free to PM

me if you have any queries.
Gerry

Parer's Pavillion
by Ter

Comment by hotpasta:
nice and simple...this is St Kilda right????