PaW 2010 Week 10.jpg
by Ter

Comment by chipuc:
impressed by the shape of the building and red-green color combination;

PaW 2010 Week 10.jpg
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Comment by hajeka:
Great color of the bricks. Just wondering what kind of building this is.

PaW 2010 Week 10.jpg
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Comment by kellymk:
Interesting geometry of this building. Also nice colour contrasts with the green vs red.

Majestic Melbourne
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Comment by Gatorguy:
Hi, Critique Club here.

Welcome to the middle of the road, zero comment club. ;)

I like all the colors in the image, you did a good job of processing multiple images without losing anything.

When I first looked at the image, I thought is was crooked, but then I saw the lens you used and figure it's just distortion. I think that since it's allowed in advanced editing, you should have straightened it out so all the verticals are vertical. The other thing is that the trees give an illusion of softness in the image, but it's probably just the wind moving them slightly during your exposures.

I think if those two points were corrected, this would have scored better.

PaW 2010 Week 9.jpg
by Ter

Comment by Tammster:
Wow, this is one of the most contrasting B&W pictures I've ever seen! This is really a great shot... perfect except for the wire (photoshop it out!). :o)

PaW 2010 Week 9.jpg
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Comment by kaiser_chief:
Black and white is way better Terry. Makes the stonework a feature of the image, whereas the colours seemed to dominate the colour version. The contrasts between the different stone shades and the mortar really works well. Also means the patchy grass isn't noticeable. haven't you been getting the recent rains?

PaW 2010 Week 9.jpg
by Ter

Comment by Germaine:
I like both shots, but this really brings out the pattern in the stonework. You can still pick out that banding in the sky, though.

outtake week 9.jpg
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Comment by Germaine:
Wow! That's some color and a cool old building.

PaW 2010 Week 9.jpg
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Comment by caseyface:
A big difference between the color and b/w. I like this one much better so good choice.

Bridge Over Not So Troubled Water
by Ter

Comment by Covert_Oddity:
I see Melbourne has been having the same weather as Sydney lately!

I think those clouds have provided you with a flat light that's let you down a little. I see some of the comments say it's let down by the composition, but I'm not so sure. I think with some good shadows in there it would become instantly much more interesting!