Teen Magazine
by draney4

Comment by RiderGal:
Personally I do not consider magazines to be in a horizontal shape... thats just me though. The entire picture looks a little tilted to me... but maybe I'm wrong. Cute idea, the comment of teens on the phone, and I love the expression on the right teens face, shee looks oh so happy, the one on the left seems to have somewhat of a "cool" attitude. I'm not sure if this would work as a magazine cover, especially not for teen magazine which tends to focus on fashion for the cover, and is always a studio shot. This looks like a fun picture for the girls involved to have in a frame though!

Swimming
by draney4

Comment by TerryGee:
good idea...unfortunately it lacks focus. Do you have auto focus? If so, it might have focused on the middle instead of the subject.

Complaint Department
by draney4

Comment by dsidwell:
Interesting use of "negativity" in this photo. I'm not sure it adds much to your overall effect, which is surreal and dream like. Is this the effect you were going for?

Teen Magazine
by draney4

Comment by GeneralE:
I assume they are talking to each other?

Teen Magazine
by draney4

Comment by nevileon:
Cute models & photo. The image might be a little stronger if the girls were closer together, and moved to the right (away from the distracting open sky & tree).

Teen Magazine
by draney4

Comment by buck4free:
There's no way this would make the cover of Teen mag. Its nothing like the style of their covers, or most magazine covers for that matter. Camera needs to be way closer in to the girls. Chatting away on the phone is a nice concept, but again, there is simply just too much backgorund and not enough detail on these girls.

Complaint Department
by draney4

Comment by frisca:
very cool negative effect! I Composition is a bit cluttered, but I suspect this is what you were going for. nicely done.

Complaint Department
by draney4

Comment by GeneralE:
You oughtta adopt a more positive attitude ....

Teen Magazine
by draney4

Comment by MarkS224:
Dont like the horizontal format for this challenge. Snapshot could use some composition.

Teen Magazine
by draney4

Comment by oldwisemonk:
I don't think Teen Magazine would ever have a cover like that. It's usually a very studio shot on the cover.