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by joanvito89

Comment by Judi:
Nice but needs contrast.

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by joanvito89

Comment by hotpasta:
the colour cast is unflattering as is the background...don't really know what other suggestions to make excep, go back to the drawing board

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by joanvito89

Comment by Dirt_Diver:
lighting is off

Message edited by ClubJuggle - 4.2(ix).

Balloons
by joanvito89

Comment by quiche:
Needs more interesting lighting. Photo looks too flat.

Balloons
by joanvito89

Comment by tUpAc_LiL_bRoThA:
blurry baloons?

Balloons
by joanvito89

Comment by rahim:
The centre of focus appears to be the rear black balloon, making the central balloon look soft.

There's very little to draw the eye or create interest.

Balloons
by joanvito89

Comment by pamelasue:
I personally don't care for this in B/W ... one of the reasons I love balloons is the bright colors ...

Balloons
by joanvito89

Comment by tojlewis:
DOF could be greater, has a very snapshot feel to it.

Balloons
by joanvito89

Comment by bassbone:
I think you have a nice concept to show shapes, but the exposure and lightin on this image need some work. First, the white balloons are more grey than white - bracketing the exposure of this photo might really help. In addition you may be able to adjust the levels on the histogram to bring out the whites and the blacks more clearly. Second, the focus seems a little soft. For a macro type image like this - sharp focus on a specific area is really needed.

Red sun glasses
by joanvito89

Comment by pamelasue:
wish this was sharper