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| 05/16/2007 02:37:53 PM |
The Catcherby mgrover63Comment by karmat: CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
Very nice clarity and rich colors on this one.
The thing that I immediately notice is that she is standing in the middle of the frame. I think the single biggest thing you could do to improve this shot is to crop it so that she is on the left third. That would leave some background for context, but would help eliminate the static-ness that goes with a centered composition, typically.
Technically, I love the clarity in this. The detail are awesome, and I'm thinking you nailed the exposure on it. Some of the whites where the sun is hitting directly are a touch blownout, but not to the point of being distracting.
Overall, it is a good shot, and pleasing to look at. While I do think you met the challenge, I also think that if you could have captured her (obvious) intensity during some action of the game, you would have scored even higher. Good work on your first entry. I look forward to seeing more of your entries.
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| 05/14/2007 09:44:36 AM |
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| 05/14/2007 03:19:25 AM |
The Catcherby mgrover63Comment by jccminty: A vertical crop would have brought this photo up to a 9 or 10. The background is way to busy. Nice photo. |
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| 05/13/2007 08:38:34 AM |
The Catcherby mgrover63Comment by whatdewuc: Nice dof, like the colors. Little blown highlights on her shoulder and hair. Her expression looks as if she just made an error. Good luck. |
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| 05/12/2007 02:32:07 AM |
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