Broken Windowsby
ColeyComment by tristalisk: Greetings from the critique club!!!
Initial impact: creepy....yet beautifull.
Color: Very nice use of duo tones. I feel that the classic sepia was a bood choice for your color.
Contrast: Very nice. You have the whites the blacks and everything in between.
Focus: The house looks to be in perfect focus, however the model looks be just a touch soft.This might have been intentional, or even unavoidable due to the DOF. But I still think it would have looked a little better with a crisper focus.
Subject: Ok not exeptionally exciting but the house is interesting enough. The house has great tones. But probably would not have carried the shot by itself. (at least from the perspective and vantage point). The model looks decent. Together they work a bit better but. I can't really seem to find a conection between the two subjects. If the model had been raking the yard, painting or somthing I could have seen the relationship. But as is it just feels like two different photos.
Lighting: Nice and creepy..no complaints
Overall: This is a good shot. Other than the relationship problem I would have no qualms with framing this peice and showing it off proudy. Very artistic, technicaly sound, and pleasant photo nice job!!
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