Emily's-feet.jpg
by Coley

Comment by carlee_h22:
Emily has MONSTER legs. You should have put that in your comments.

Cassie Comes Home
by Coley

Comment by carlee_h22:
this is my favourite picture of me ever. :) Teehee.

Q.jpg
by Coley

Comment by carlee_h22:
man I lost that scarf like a day after this shoot. I miss it. :(

Quite Perplexing
by Coley

Comment by ShannonLee:
gosh i love this pic
i like to come back and visit it often :)

Peace and Quiet?
by Coley

Comment by msizer:
Wow, I was just browsing around and came across this. Beautiful colour, composition, expression of the model - it's just a great pic all around. Kudos!

Path.jpg
by Coley

Comment by BAMartin:
So peaceful and inviting. Wonder what the house ate the end of this driveway looks like.

Emily's-feet.jpg
by Coley

Comment by CapeSail:
Great poster, very nice with the alternating darks/lights.

All We Are Saying, Is Give Peas A Chance
by Coley

Comment by JerseyGenie:
Cole, you may not like peas ... but you did a marvelous job with this shot. I think I like the shot and the story equally. And you don't even show a glimmer of your disdain with the great smile.
Very creative, very good shot, very good pp.

Emily's-feet.jpg
by Coley

Comment by angela_packard:
thats awsome...I like this idea!!!!!!!!!1

A Vanishing Point A Vanishing Subject
by Coley

Comment by jerowe:
Hello from the Critique club, my name is Jon Rowe, and i will be looking at your image this evening :)

Composition/Lighting : this is a great example of when a centrally composed subject works. very spooky. i think this is very well done. i believe the reason for the 5s is two-fold. i gave it a 7 for i loved it, but thinking on behalf of the rest of the DPC crowd, the lighting left a lack of detail in the fore/background and in the subject itself. also, i think the placement of the model makes this look too staged. the actual "vanishing" of the subject and of the railroad tracks seem to possibly leave the model missplaced in my opinion. if she was placed further back down the tracks, with the look of walking towards the camera/viewer, i believe this might show off the end of the tracks (vanishing point #1) and the model (vanishing point #2). i do like what you did here, and think it deserved a higher score, but if i had to nit-pick, that would be my opinion.

Challenge : this definitely meets the challenge. i like the look of the tracks, and the seeing through the subject to see the back vanishing point. very clever, and unfortunately i believe a number of those 5s didn't take the chance to notice that the girl was not the only thing vanishing in this fine poetic image.

Conclusion : very well done, i love your work. i have admired quite a few of your shots for some time now and find it a privilege to critique one of your entries. keep up the good work. great image here, and not that bad of a placement at all. even got a few favorites out of it, that always helps :D

Keep on shootin!

Good luck on your future challenges:)
-Jon Rowe