Hands
by alanjerry

Comment by jeger:
The hands and crack are very nice. I'm a little confused as to what the blurred part of the image is.

Hands
by alanjerry

Comment by jblaylockrayner:
Interesting idea - Nice tones but could do with a little more contrast to add some pop to the pic. The composition is a little awkward.

Hands
by alanjerry

Comment by JeffDay:
sorry , not getting this

ronnie and the spoon
by alanjerry

Comment by alanjerry:
i am thankful for your feedback, some ideas are to subtle to be seen feedback is always good no matter what.
Again thanks you.

ronnie and the spoon
by alanjerry

Comment by RN Patti:
creative, thought provoking toy

ronnie and the spoon
by alanjerry

Comment by HeiSch:
composition could be chosen differently. the spoon is cropped, the bench is not parrallel to the picture frame, the shadow in the spoon could have been removed(turning the spoon or with reflectors). the 2 yellows don't harmonize, they seem to conflict with each other. Hand and spoon seem to have no relation to each other. I'm not really sure what you want to show. If you spend a little more time thinking through your picture and even sketch it out on a piece of paper before you shoot, you will realize what you want to show.

ronnie and the spoon
by alanjerry

Comment by Tammer:
Your photo is okay for me, but it doesn't hold my interest for long. Maybe if taken from a different angle or adding a third element would increase viewer interest.

ronnie and the spoon
by alanjerry

Comment by oterodesign:
ok?

window seat
by alanjerry

Comment by alanjerry:
Thanks for the feedback yes this is from a trolley in Memphis, Tenn. and i wanted to crop that edge however just coming out of some old school teaching a refrained from cropping. The sky was not popped because i again refrained from heavy photoshop curves. I was looking at the the clouds mimicing the sculpture and the brigde lining up with sculpture blah blah blah yeah it is easy to fallin love with your own work.

ronnie and the spoon
by alanjerry

Comment by Puckzzz:
I don't get it. it kinda looks like a snapshot to me.

sorry.