Lost Soulby
jmsetzlerComment by Kavey: Critique Club
Initial thoughts
Interesting idea, a little too white at the top right.
Composition/ Content
Ghost idea is interesting though the expression on your face is a little grim – I would think a ghost would be happy to enjoy such a pretty location!
The area is pretty but I don’t think black and white does anything for it – on this occasion it makes the image seem dull or slightly life-less – perhaps with a ghost in it that is the idea!
I like the triangle made by the lower edge of the frame and the fencing.
Background
Background is kind of foreground as well! I find it too light in the area of trees at top middle to right.
Camera Work - Technical
OK except exposure/ lighting.
Digital Processing - Technical
Seems fine.
Fits The Challenge
I have no idea – I can’t figure out from the assigment page which challenge this is in and I have had a quick look in Landscape for Lost Soul and can’t find it.
Your Opinion On The Photo
Reasonably interesting, not one I̢۪d be looking at again and again.
EDIT: OK I went via your profile page and it's from Stranger ...
Yes it fits the challenge.
Message edited by author 2003-01-13 04:37:24.