Look at me - I'm a train on a track
by Miep

Comment by ragamuffingirl:
This is another one that should have been shot at a different time of day. The train is almost obscured by the shadow of the hill.

Look at me - I'm a train on a track
by Miep

Comment by Teafran:
From a technical standpoint this is good, but flawed. The over dark subject matter as compared to the title doesn't quite work. This flaw affects the image from an artistic standpoint, it's rather bland and uninviting to the viewer. Sometimes an image is just an image and author's need to recognise that. Having said that a worthy entry into the challenge and directly related to the challenge subject. A good effort falling short in being a success in the technical and artistic sense.

Look at me - I'm a train on a track
by Miep

Comment by Melethia:
Yes, yes you are. Love the way the light catches the track in the shadows.

Look at me - I'm a train on a track
by Miep

Comment by Yo_Spiff:
I'm looking, I'm looking! Waiting for you to do a trick or something. I like the perspective and composition. I think you were probably aware of those really dark shadows on the left hiding lots of detail.

Look at me - I'm a train on a track
by Miep

Comment by npasel:
Neat idea, a little dark on the left though.

Look at me - I'm a train on a track
by Miep

Comment by jdixonsd:
Nics shot, but it's a little dark IMO.

studying Textures
by Miep

Comment by Sheryll:
Great idea. Could be better with either greater dof or having the focus point in the foreground with the child slightly oof. Also might be improved with a little more of the steps and stonework. I realize that might not have been possible depending on what was going on outside the frame of what you have though.

studying Textures
by Miep

Comment by Steef:
well done. the composition is great and the processing is awesome.

studying Textures
by Miep

Comment by Teafran:
The fade from the foreground is distracting and the image is too tall to be truly effective with respect to the title. If the bottom were cropped off the improvement would be significant. A good effort lacking in execution.

studying Textures
by Miep

Comment by Ja-9:
pretty good...nice colors