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Comment by geekgirl717:
For me, too much light from the open door. It pulls at my gaze.

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Comment by gdub1189:
the lighting inside the garage is nice, but i think the bright light on the right is a little too washed out.

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Comment by Ord0:
Maybe this is not the best spot to take a picture of these two bikes. Too dark inside and too bright outside - the right part is very overexposed and there is not much detail in the bicycles themselves.

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Comment by Nuzzer:
Hi from the Critique Club

Fit: This fits the challenge well.

Composition: A composition where the subject is dead centre is always going to be hard. "Dont put the subject in the centre" is a rule, and for a good reason. Our brains seem to like images where the subject is not in the centre.

Technical: I cant find much to fault technically.

Feel: The voters may share my general feeling that while there is nothing too wrong with the image, there is just nothing about it that makes me consider it above average. Hence the 5 votes come rolling in. It's good work for your first entry.

PM me if you have any queries.

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Comment by HeiSch:
the overexposed door works great. a little more and you could have wiped out the car as well. This could have created even more glare as a challenge to the unknown outside.

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Comment by jerryc12:
This is a very difficult shot with a huge range of brightness. The shadows have no detail and the highlights are blown out. Nice try.

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Comment by the99:
good light

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Comment by vayu:
Too bright.

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Comment by klstover:
Love the blown highlights. Makes me feel like anything could be out there... so full of opportunity and hope and excitement.

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Comment by menele:
Nice idea, would perhaps have more impact if we could see the outside better?