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Comment by heida:
lol Very impressive

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Comment by irockstars:
I would try cropping off some of the bottom to add emphasis to the figure.

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Comment by jillz:
Without the title, I would not have put this in a Speed challenge. The idea is good and the subject is well done. However, your cluttered background is very distracting. Would have been much better if done in front of a drop cloth.

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Comment by KarenB:
great jump and exposure length.. I might have tried to put up a backdrop to eliminate the busy background.

Boats in the Bay
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Comment by peggy:
Too much sky. Should have been cropped.

oooooh.... this is gona be expensive
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Comment by cpanaioti:
*Critique Club*

General: This is a good attempt at a documentary shot. If this is what you were trying to accomplish then you succeeded.

Composition: The fingers are a bit distracting. Showing more teeth and concentrating on either the lower or upper set to emphasize a particular area could possibly improve the composition.

Exposure: In general the exposure is good. There is just one hot spot on a tooth on the upper right. This could probably be corrected by noting where the light is coming from and adjusting the angle accordingly.

Impact: Looking at someones teeth is usually not very appealing (except for a dentist). What might help is isolating one tooth. That said, for the purpose you propose in your comments you could probably succeed with this type of photo.


Colette

Boats in the Bay
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Comment by drydoc:
Way too much empty space top and bottom.

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Comment by dacrazyrn:
Spectacular shot. The colors and exposure are outstanding. Great silhouettes

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Comment by Shinenlite:
nice jump!!

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Comment by mykatautumn:
wow can this man jump