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| 12/07/2003 11:12:55 PM |
They Are Sweet Onions.... Really, Trust Me !!!!by DrakeComment by StevePax: Greetings from the Critique Club.
OK, I see what you were going for here. But, the lighting makes it tough to figure out exactly what's going on here.
As for composition, I think you should have made it ovbiously off-centered, or exactly centered. Either would have worked, but this barely off-centered thing here makes it look like an accident.
Finally, as for the smoke, it is a great idea, and very well captured. Unfortunately, it starts from below your image, so it really just looks like smoke from an unrelated source.
I hope this helps!
Steve |
| 12/07/2003 01:34:32 PM |
"In The Mood"by DrakeComment by GeneralE: I like the idea ... I think I'd have tried a taller, skinnier arrangement so only one page of the sheet music shows, or else all the way horizontally so you see the top of both pages. On my monitor, the brightest highlights on the sax don't quite fit "the mood." |
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