Day Flows to Dusk, then Into the Nightby
The_DentistComment by ursula: Greetings from the Critique Club
Challenge: Meets the challenge, but not in an obvious, "this is a triptych at first glance" kind of way. Congratulations on your new personal best!
Strong points: Uniqueness, great execution.
Possile weak points: Uniqueness :) The scene is not the most interesting there is.
Technicals: I see no problem with your technicals - both your exposures and your processing look excellent. Your blending of the three scenes is flawless.
Presentation: The horizon line in the centre of the image works against the dynamic aspect of showing three stages in a day in the city. There is too much empty sky here. IMHO, moving the camera down a bit and a tad to the right, so that the horizon line would be more at 1/3 from the top, and the bright road would point from the corner to about 1/3 from top, 1/3 from right hand side, might work better.
Overall: I am very impressed with both the concept and the execution. It is something you need to experiment with some more, it's a great idea with a lot of potential. I'm glad you got a high score and a good placement for this image.
I hope this helps. If I can be of further help, please let me know.
~Ursula
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