Just take a bite
by MarioAngel

Comment by lillyspad75:
mmmmmmmmmmm........looks good

Just take a bite
by MarioAngel

Comment by Qiki:
For a cliche shot like this to do well, it has to be absolutely spot on. For me, the focus here is just a little soft and you could have done with bumping the saturation of the reds a bit more.

I Do
by MarioAngel

Comment by loseme:
*Critique Club*

"I do" is a great entry into the Love II challenge. I think you did a good job of picking a pretty universal subject that we can all understand without explaining.

The focus is really good, I really like that the focus is clear and clean on the subject and you were able to create such a soft feeling around the edges. The lighting is nice, it is not over bearing.

This is a very good job especially for your first challenge. I really think you already ahead of the curve in finding subjects that appeal to the viewers. Nice work.

You don't want to see the dark side of a woman
by MarioAngel

Comment by quasicamera:
flat

You don't want to see the dark side of a woman
by MarioAngel

Comment by pamelasue:
almost too dark ... you should bring up the brightness a tad bit

You don't want to see the dark side of a woman
by MarioAngel

Comment by aerogurl:
more light, a great pose that could be improved upon.

I Do
by MarioAngel

Comment by JBHale:
I love the soft edges around the frame. I also like the sort of blue tint this seems to have. It isn't as attention-getting as others, but the composition and execution are very good.

Message edited by author 2007-02-28 00:06:33.

I Do
by MarioAngel

Comment by trpote:
flat lighting, shadows would help

I Do
by MarioAngel

Comment by itsthelight:
hairy fingers...

I Do
by MarioAngel

Comment by anindya:
Great work done. Nice perspective!