A day at the beach
by Ronin

Comment by Willa:
Excuse me... what is this, and what does it have to do with CHILDHOOD?

A day at the beach
by Ronin

Comment by camelotnorth:
great DOF ..good composition

A day at the beach
by Ronin

Comment by justine:
Great idea and good work. Score 7 Kee

A day at the beach
by Ronin

Comment by lmhr:
cool! maybe a bit bright?

American Classic #2
by Ronin

Comment by pauld:
Good eye movement with this - skin, tatoo, pencil...

American Classic #2
by Ronin

Comment by MaYz:
God I love this shot.

American Classic #2
by Ronin

Comment by vin rigby:
lovely exposure, quality shot 8

American Classic #2
by Ronin

Comment by HBunch:
Oh gosh, please don't take this the wrong way. The angle is good. It just kind of makes the model look like she has a really big butt. I know she doesn't cause she has such a slim waste, but the perspective makes it seem that way. I think that a more straight on shot of the back might have been a bit more flattering. Unless, of course, you were going for this look, then I'll leave it alone. It kind of looks like you are taking a photo of a pencil, but trying to show off the tattoo. You could reverse it, you could take a photo of the tattoo at a more direct angle, and have the pencil still in the pocket be visible, but kind of in the background. I like the tattoo, it gives the photo originality. Might have looked more natural if the model was wearing a half shirt, instead of scrunching up a full shirt. The lighting is beautiful, and the red belt gives this photo zing. Good luck with the challenge.

American Classic #2
by Ronin

Comment by underground:
Unique and clever. Overall, eye catching, but try more dramatic lighting.

American Classic #2
by Ronin

Comment by jsabbarton:
Nice.... Pencil.....