Colourful Mindsby
jonpinkComment by jpochard: Hi from the Critique Club.
When I receive a photo to critique, I first look at it without the title or other info to see if I can guess which challenge it is from.
This one was obvious! I did not vote in the desat challenge, but I would have given you one of my 10's (I'm very stingy with them!) I think this is an awesome shot.
What strikes me about it first off is the intensity of the black and white. It has a very dramatic feel to it, certainly enhanced by that sky - and I think the colors help play up that fact. My only nitpic with the exposure or levels is the bright white shirt walking toward the viewer. It's a little distracting, but that's nitpicky.
The composition is perfect in my opinion. The lines compliment each other and lead the eye to the center and down the walkway. The people being scattered just a bit give it some movement and a bit of a journalistic feel, I think.
This is really an artful photograph and one of my favorites for this challenge. Congratulations!
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