Rainbow of Eggs
by daisypaige

Comment by Bud:
Excellent composition and lighting! Great image.

"Grain"
by daisypaige

Comment by faery:
Wistful. I think your title is a little bit of a let - down...stating the obvious. But this has a lot of poetry in it and shows the movement of the grasses in the wind which is lovely. Simple, delicate and beautiful.

"Grain"
by daisypaige

Comment by cutout:
yes

Her Medicine for a Broken Heart
by daisypaige

Comment by atupdate:
Hello from the Critique Club,

The technical aspects of this image are very good. The background is evenly light. The focus is sharp and the post processing brought out the detail very nicely. So why didn't this score in the sixes? I think there are a couple of reasons. First, the creativeness of this image is a little subtle, as the relationship between where the wrapper was cut and the title was probably lost by those voters that only looked for a couple of seconds then clicked on the 5. Second, the composition of the image is pretty good but the cropping of the left end of the candy bar falls into the personal preference category and is reason enough to vote 5 instead of 6 for many voters. I also agree with the comments regarding the cutting of the wrapper instead of tearing it. It just doesn't look natural. Overall, a good image that scored well, creative idea that could have scored higher with a different execution.

Feel free to PM me if you have any questions regarding this critique.

Tim

"Grain"
by daisypaige

Comment by iyadrally:
ok grainy but wher is the picture!!!!!!!

"Grain"
by daisypaige

Comment by Ken:
Clever, but main grain looks a bit soft.

Her Medicine for a Broken Heart
by daisypaige

Comment by daisypaige:
Thank You to everyone. I was so proud of this pic!!!!! To answer one of the questions, "How did you get the end elevated" the answer is I simply put a little thing under it to make it elevated! Special thenks to admart01 who I could never have done this pic. without, atupdate who critiqued this picture and SandyP one of my favorites who always gives me a great comment!!!!

Message edited by author 2007-03-15 16:23:41.

Rainbow of Eggs
by daisypaige

Comment by Melethia:
Love the bright pastels - a sort of oxymoron that works here. The black hole has depth to it, which is quite a feat!

"Grain"
by daisypaige

Comment by sevilduvarci:
nice one.

Her Medicine for a Broken Heart
by daisypaige

Comment by SandyP:
Tee hee. . .always works for me :) Great idea, and executed perfectly with that clean white background!