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| 06/12/2003 11:51:03 PM |
Outdoor Photographerby progersctComment by kyrielle: Oh, nicely done - I like that the focus is on 'photography' rather than on the person who is the photographer, seeing her only in silhouette. |
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| 06/12/2003 01:12:02 AM |
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| 06/11/2003 05:33:03 PM |
Outdoor Photographerby progersctComment by DCThiessen: I like it. :) Having the photographer as a sillhouette (sp?) was a great idea. To me, it shows the photographer but more than that, it helps to highlight what the photographer is photographing. Very cool. |
| 06/11/2003 07:57:48 AM |
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| 06/11/2003 02:30:50 AM |
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| 06/11/2003 01:46:05 AM |
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| 06/10/2003 09:06:15 PM |
Polishby progersctComment by SweetKali: Fashion!!! But where is the liquid?? the glow of the patent leather or the slick glow of the bracelet??? |
| 06/09/2003 11:53:11 PM |
Polishby progersctComment by frisca: I like the choice of b/w, it keeps the repetition of the straps of her shoes and of her bracelets prominent, and the polish keeps you within the theme. Very nice composition. And nice model for letting you take a shot of her feet! :) |
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| 06/09/2003 11:26:25 AM |
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| 06/08/2003 08:52:49 PM |
In Her Roomby progersctComment by sylandrix: Greetings from the Critique Club!...
COMPOSITION...Overall I think you've managed to achieve a very effective portrait for several reasons: The figure has a very intent and relaxed looking expression for one. An expression that's a bit enigmatic which causes me to look at the photo longer than I habitually would. Duotones and background isolate and emphasize the subject. There are just some elements in the background that distract a bit... the black piece in the bottom left and what looks like a bevelled edge on the far right. A bit of her bracelet is also visible - all can be eliminated by cropping a little closer to the face, but still maintaining space for her elbows.. This also results in a less square frame and more of a portrait one... which also works nicely
TECHNIQUE... Very well exposed... Though the highlights on the background and a bit of her shirt are blown out, her face, skin, etc. are almost perfectly exposed.. On my calibrated monitor, the shadows on her hair seem just a little light and I would darken those a bit using a levels adjustment... Its nice getting those catch-lights in the eyes also :) |
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