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by bennettjamie

Comment by bdenny:
I like this one alot. She looks natural and the angle is interesting. The only thing I'd do differently is try not to get the soles of her shoes in the shot (maybe a different angle). But that's just nitpicking.

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by bennettjamie

Comment by bdenny:
I was gonna say what he said. She does look uncomfortable with the squinting. Other than that, its great.

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by bennettjamie

Comment by MelonMusketeer:
Composition, the expression, and DOF with no major distracting elements work well with this shot. The light is good too, with the exception of the one highlight on her lip which may be easy to fix.

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by bennettjamie

Comment by MelonMusketeer:
For the full body shot, this one is the nicest of this group. I would try to darken the bright top of the rail a little, as bright areas tend to draw the viewers attention to them.

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by bennettjamie

Comment by MelonMusketeer:
This one seems to have the nicest light and the most natural and comfortable pose. It's a bit wide angle for a portrait, lncluding the RR track may not be the best idea, as I don't see many girls who look this nice walking on RR tracks. From her hair tips to the top of her head, and with the two small branches cloned out, this would be the best of the bunch IMHO. I don't think it would crop that much and still have enough resolution to be excellent.

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by bennettjamie

Comment by MelonMusketeer:
The bright sunlight in her eyes made her squint in this one. She just looks very uncomfortable with the bright light.

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by bennettjamie

Comment by MelonMusketeer:
This is a sweet pose and smile, even the eyes are smiling. The bits of redness in her complexion are a little distracting. I like the composition. I would use the burn tool a bit on the bright shoes.

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by bennettjamie

Comment by MelonMusketeer:
Wider aperture and less DOF would have helped with this one. It would reduce the strong texture of the tree behind her head.

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by bennettjamie

Comment by BHuseman:
This is a great shot that looks fun and it well exposed. It all works very well, but my only suggestion is to either clone or crop the shoes from the photo. Other than that it looks great. Nice Belly Button!

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by bennettjamie

Comment by dwterry:
Might play with dodge and burn to add a little drama to this image. But I like it pretty much as is.