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Acrophobia Therapyby SonifoComment by Silver Fox: Really nice black and white that you've taken here my friend. Looks like a very long walk from one end to the other, and you would feel trapped if you had any kind of mental illness, wouldn't you? once again, nice photograph, nice dof. |
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| 03/13/2003 05:10:04 PM |
Easter Eggsby SonifoComment by karmat: CRITIQUE CLUB CRITIQUE
by karmat
HI SONIFO!!!
COMPOSITION
Your composition has a very stable effect, primarily because of the centered position, I think. The eyes rest on the eggs, then follow the shape of the bowl-container thingy downward. For some reason, the number of eggs bothers me -- maybe an odd number would allow you to form a definite triangle shape or pyramid and this would give a more balanced feeling to it. Just a minor nitpick though, and probably just a personal thing.
TECHNIQUE
Great macro work. Your focus is right on, and the lighting works well. The colors are nice. The one non-blue egg (the greenish one) really sticks out, I think. The bowl thing is blue, you have a blue egg, a pink egg and a blue/pink egg, leaving the yellow one with nothing to "tie it" into the picture. On the one hand, this may have appealed to some by making one element stand out. On the other, it may have made some people feel that something was off. Maybe if there was some green or yellow elsewhere, it would tie the egg more into the picture.
OVERALL EFFECT
A very nice shot. Colorful and well done. Congrats and best wishes in future challenges.
karmat
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| 03/11/2003 12:57:54 AM |
NO! I'm not ready to let him go!by SonifoComment by Sonifo: Thanks everyone for your comments. It did better then I thought it would.
Thanks Karen and Karmat. It was a very tough week for me. I will see him someday. God has blessed me with 4 other wonderful children. |
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