Summer Innocence
by dssagent88

Comment by SaraR:
This could be a lovely,incredibly beautiful,portrait, but as it is there is something about it that is just off the mark. There appears to be a silver sheen over the model that I find rather odd, almost as though her skin and hair have been partially desaturated. The result is that the viewers concentration centres on the model's lips and eyes, but (for me at any rate) to the point that those are almost all I see - as though the individual is no more than her features. Hmm, I'm not sure I have articulated my thoughts very well here - I wouln't normally invite this, but if you want clarification, drop me a PM

Summer Innocence
by dssagent88

Comment by simplylaf:
Beautiful!! Great light and composition. The eyes are the main focus as they should be. Good job!!

Summer Innocence
by dssagent88

Comment by bleu:
Her eyes are a little strange. Maybe less dodge next time. I like her postion though.

Oh, how we miss him...
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Comment by LaMas:
Very nice

Summer Innocence
by dssagent88

Comment by xodiak:
Really appreciate your restraint in muting colors here. It makes the shot much more dramatic.

Summer Innocence
by dssagent88

Comment by kevip6:
Seems like a really good portrait but the colours and saturation are ruining it. The face looks almost grey? on the plus side the composition/pose/focus are excellent

Summer Innocence
by dssagent88

Comment by AP:
cool composition and great light, i just think this is a tad over-processed (even by my standards :P) still a 7.

Summer Innocence
by dssagent88

Comment by albc28:
Here eyes lookk weird. The whites are too white I think. I love the photo, but it's weird at the same time.

Summer Innocence
by dssagent88

Comment by Bosborne:
10

Oh, how we miss him...
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Comment by Cyclop:
Nice or sad twist on this theme