on the beach
by EstimatedEyes

Comment by jjstager2:
The B & W really works well. I am curious as to what made you chose to center the subject rather than adhere to the rule of thirds.

on the beach
by EstimatedEyes

Comment by liberty:
Very nice, like the idea, the paper is the main subject here, good work, 10.

on the beach
by EstimatedEyes

Comment by ordinaryangel:
I would like to see this with a boost in contrast.

on the beach
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Comment by kreshkin:
I like this a lot.

on the beach
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Comment by rjkstesch:
Very nice. I thought you might be shooting for this challenge when I saw you taking this series.

on the beach
by EstimatedEyes

Comment by surfdabbler:
The first thing I notice is the centred composition, so you can't see much of the nice beach, but I guess that's the point. They are missing the scenery. I like that you just see the top of their head, buried in the paper. It just lacks a little punch. A slight S-curve in the levels would help to pop it out, or whatever editing methods you are comfortable with.

on the beach
by EstimatedEyes

Comment by ShutterPug:
not bad - just lacks any 'wow'

on the beach
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Comment by riversong:
Love your image!

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Comment by KarenNfld:
A classic in B&W, well done

on the beach
by EstimatedEyes

Comment by IAmMoen:
i like how the fog makes a place that is traditionally open and deep and more desolate alone feeling. Almost devoid of the openness of the outdoors.