Rugged Style from L.L. Bean
by stevieian

Comment by Cheerz:
Hi Hemerlein,

I must admit. I didn't rate this photo too highly on first glance.
But looking at it for a second time, and stringing together what you've shot in your portfolio, I can "see" why it's been shot this way.

I must say, the technical of the photo is excellent. Ie. exposure, colors, contrast etc.

From the assumption that you're trying to show case a certain "fashion style", the photo would had lack a little "punch".

I see lively colors, Lauren's lunch and a school bag. The story should be around going to school, or along that line. What I'll do is to add a little "human touch" to the photo by introducing a child model (remember to get him/ her to sign the model release).

Have him pose beside the product (Bag), and flash a megawatt smile!

Cheers
Eric.

school house addition
by stevieian

Comment by hotpasta:
I like the tones and the idea...nice work

Rugged Style from L.L. Bean
by stevieian

Comment by colorcarnival:
I love this because it does look like something straight out of the cata log. I love the lighting and clarity on all your items. Cute touch with the name on the bag too. Hope it ribbons!

Rugged Style from L.L. Bean
by stevieian

Comment by sillygoat:
Love the little details!!! 9

Rugged Style from L.L. Bean
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Comment by Erwan_B:
I think it's a bit too dull/dark on the first part of the image mainly.

Rugged Style from L.L. Bean
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Comment by KarenNfld:
Perfect!! This looks like a photo that would be in their catalogue. I hope this wins a ribbon.

Rugged Style from L.L. Bean
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Comment by snaffles:
great back-to-school shot, but doesn't really say 'rugged' imho.

Rugged Style from L.L. Bean
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Comment by beckydi:
The pencils and leaves are a nice touch!

Rugged Style from L.L. Bean
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Comment by LadyK:
nice! this is great!-8

Rugged Style from L.L. Bean
by stevieian

Comment by Tygerr:
Cute product idea.