Dressing on a Summer Eveningby
alexzenComment by ursula: Greetings from the Critique Club
Challenge: Definitely meets the challenge.
Strong points: The slight voyeuristic feeling of the image, without being a in your face "voyeur" shot, works in favour of the image. The warm colour scheme. Sexy and fun, as one of your commenters puts it.
Possible weaknesses: The cut-off areas of the model (in centre and right image). The uneven colour of the framing between the images. The same framing is too wide, it separates the images too much - it might be better to have those frames be the same width, or even less width, than the edge frame. The top frame being so much narrower is a bit jarring.
Technicals: Look great to me. The exposure seems right on, your idea of the textured curtain to provide interest was great.
Overall: A fun image, nicely done, and with a good score to show for it. Keep up the good work!
I hope this helps. If I can be of further help, please let me know.
~Ursula
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