'Pencil Neck' Vest .......The New Fall Fashion Must Have
by njsabs

Comment by hopnjohn:
Very creative. Hope you do well!

'Pencil Neck' Vest .......The New Fall Fashion Must Have
by njsabs

Comment by voyeur:
so good. great concept. great composition. great model. good lighting. 9.

'Pencil Neck' Vest .......The New Fall Fashion Must Have
by njsabs

Comment by JeffDay:
nice light, especially the catchlights

'Pencil Neck' Vest .......The New Fall Fashion Must Have
by njsabs

Comment by Yo_Spiff:
Every girl in middle school will want one now!

'Pencil Neck' Vest .......The New Fall Fashion Must Have
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Comment by bubeltrubel:
finally a really good pic in this challenge! I love the idea: very creative! Otherwise it's a beautiful portrait! Very good sharpness and clarity! I wish it in the Top 3!

'Pencil Neck' Vest .......The New Fall Fashion Must Have
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Comment by Simms:
This will probably ribbon, then again (and dont take this the wrong way), its a pretty poor challenge with some dreadful entries.

'Pencil Neck' Vest .......The New Fall Fashion Must Have
by njsabs

Comment by kelvinyam:
This is creative. I like the portrait.

'Pencil Neck' Vest .......The New Fall Fashion Must Have
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Comment by actnout:
Very creative use of the subject matter. Beautiful young lady, accent on the eyes and over all color 8

'Pencil Neck' Vest .......The New Fall Fashion Must Have
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Comment by zohar-halfon:
You have here a beautiful portrait style photo – executed to perfection. Your model is beautiful, and the “vest” idea is great. The one thing that is not so great (actually kind of messy) is the “pencil vest” that you have created.
After all, the theme is Pencil(s), and not “Portrait”, and that is where in my humble opinion, you have dropped the ball. Its always nice to see a beautiful portrait of a beautiful child but with 3 new themes a week, I would have liked to see more attention to the actual theme.

'Pencil Neck' Vest .......The New Fall Fashion Must Have
by njsabs

Comment by nati_in_here:
a little heavy to carry around look! still is preatty