Topless Tripod
by smardaz

Comment by karmat:
Great lighting on this. Nice work.

Morning ritual with cream.
by smardaz

Comment by karmat:
I like the simplicity of this, also, i think your composition is very effective.

Morning ritual with cream.
by smardaz

Comment by whiteroom:
good one!

Topless Tripod
by smardaz

Comment by Dantzr:
Nice idea, nice setup and good all over picture. I think I would have lightened it up a little to bring out the tripod more. Although after seeing the title it jumps out at me, but I am not sure if I would have known otherwise. Meets the Challenge dead on! (7)

Morning ritual with cream.
by smardaz

Comment by bassbone:
excellent image - love the feel created - back to up it to 9

Morning ritual with cream.
by smardaz

Comment by downtherabbithole:
I love this image had you thought about cropping in on the left, the info there isn't doing much for the image and it would take away the blown out whites.

overall nice image. 8

Morning ritual with cream.
by smardaz

Comment by Jutilda:
I like the light. Nice simplicity. Not many still lifes, eh?

Quiet Reflections at Snoqualmie Pass
by smardaz

Comment by jonfrommk:
I cannot believe that this did not give you your first six months ago!!!

An absolutely magnificent shot. The reflection is superb, the colours are wonderful. Great application of rule of thirds and the border works well

I hope this is hanging in your house

Quiet Reflections at Snoqualmie Pass
by smardaz

Comment by levyj413:
Yep, I don't get it, either. Would've pegged this a good half-point higher.

14.....Beginning of the End of My Little Girl.
by smardaz

Comment by geoffb:
Hi from the Critique Club,

Jason, congratulations on your personal best and top 15 finish! It's really evident here that you've learned from your previous entries, and will continue to improve in the future.

The fact that you only have 4 votes under five clearly shows that your image has universal appeal. Your focus is bang-on in exactly the right place, and despite not having any lighting equipment you were able to light the scene well and create appealing catch lights in the eyes. As was already said, you've captured an expression that could evoke any of a thousand emotions.

For the most part, the shadows are good in this image. There was a second light acting partially as a fill light, which creates a distracting secondary "moustache" shadow under the nose. As well, the eyes (especially her right eye) appear a bit over processed. These are both fairly trivial complaints, as you have created an excellent image with few flaws.

Congratulations again! This is a great shot.

Regards,
Geoff