the other side of the tracks
by smardaz

Comment by ErinKirsten:
She is a gorgeous girl - I'd love to see a bit more detail around her eyes.

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Comment by ScooterMcNutty:
I do like this picture, although what another photography said, there is too much middle grey. (or something like that) i think that contrast could have been better. maybe not have the entry light on?
I do like this shot over all!

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Comment by posthumous:
nice composition.

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Comment by bvy:
I wonder how many Escher comments you've gotten so far. I like this. Good geometry and mid-key conversion.

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Comment by RianBotes:
I like this very much. 7

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Comment by glad2badad:
Tough location to shoot...the tonal range on this seems limited with a lot of middle grey.

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Comment by bmartuch:
Very neat image. Like the contrast and the grain.

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Comment by Denise:
nice use of lights and lines, good eye

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Comment by manavg:
I like the beautiful imagery and mood in this ..but too much noise. 6

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Comment by Paul:
I'm going through the entries, stopping at those images I feel have had the benefit of an unconventional eye and dwelling a little longer to try to see and appreciate what you saw. This is one of those images.

Positives: Great moody image - bring your own story stuff. I really like the POV and the use of the straight lines.

Critical stuff: I'm not a fan of your conversion, I think a stronger contrast treatment might have been better - the grain too, enough to annoy but not enough to delight.

Overall: I really like the idea but I'm not sure this is an optimal edit.