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| 06/05/2010 10:37:05 PM |
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| 06/04/2010 02:14:14 PM |
Just Meby J-MeComment by Louis: Your portrait doesn't work because you haven't paid enough attention to the light -- it's straight on, as indicated by the overall flatness of the light and lack of contrast in your face, and the position of the catchlight in your visible eye. Although such light sometimes works, it's tricky professionals' work. You'd have been best served by a standard portrait setup with lights at either of the two 45 degree angles to your face and appropriately powered, or, if you have no such setup, by soft natural light coming through a window and highlighting one side of your face, with the other helped by a reflector. The background is much too dark, and your top blends into it in an uninteresting way. 5 |
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| 06/04/2010 09:39:42 AM |
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| 06/03/2010 02:38:07 PM |
Just Meby J-MeComment by BrennanOB: The focus seems to be a bit froward, I see lots of detail in the brim of the hat, but much less in the eye, where I want all the detail I can get. Secondly the highlights seem close to blown on much of the face, the fine detail has been lost. On the plus side I like your leading lines, the gentle swoop of the hat and the hair move the eye around. |
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| 06/03/2010 01:28:51 AM |
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| 06/02/2010 12:10:32 AM |
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| 06/01/2010 04:02:22 PM |
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| 05/02/2010 09:08:47 PM |
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| 04/29/2010 05:32:50 PM |
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| 04/27/2010 10:54:36 AM |
Into The Cityby J-MeComment by Ja-9: for ME...this seems to be more "street photography" than Urban Scape...just my opinion |
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