zip seeds
by tnun

Comment by Revecca:
So pretty and soft.

zip seeds
by tnun

Comment by eniko:
Well spotted!

consume my heart away
by tnun

Comment by tnun:
lovely lovely valued comments. impulse rewarded.

consume my heart away
by tnun

Comment by insteps:
What blindjustice said. Love the title too!

consume my heart away
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Comment by blindjustice:
Very beautiful. Holds attention superbly. Not that score matters, but if it did, it would be vastly underrated.

consume my heart away
by tnun

Comment by ubique:


Never got my comments done. This was on my podium with equal silver medal. Or given the challenge topic, maybe equal bronze is better.
I'd have said something about the living experience it takes to distil this poem with such assurance. No country for callow youth. But I can't say that now because you'll think I'm just trimming my watchamajigger to suit the breeze, or some such mexed mitaphor. I admired your picture, gave it a 9, and a thank you.

consume my heart away
by tnun

Comment by herfotoman:
Such aching. Wonderful.

consume my heart away
by tnun

Comment by skewsme:
Jester in despair. Parfait.

consume my heart away
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Comment by posthumous:
Beauteous abstract well titled

upon a fence
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Comment by Beetle:
I'm trying to understand this, but there is so much going on and the colours are odd. Very confusing......