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| 04/21/2004 07:20:55 AM |
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| 12/01/2003 12:30:21 PM |
Eat at Tony's, it's the best.by bruskiComment by ellamay: Greetings from the CC, seems like lots of folks think this is more advertising, but I will look more at shot itself, taking 'challenge topic' considerations out. I find the shot too small for one and very busy for a small space. It feels very crammed, making my unsure of what to focus on. I think a simpler less busy compostion may have served you better. I don't find the glass in the background at all neccessary, nor the slices of bread on the right side. The garlic on the left is a little overexposed. I wonder if you would try reshoooting with less objects and see if it comes together a little better. I do like the way that the uncooked spaghetti is presented on the table, and the plate of spaghetti itself. Perhaps these, and the wine would be enough to work with.
I think your idea is good, keep playing with it, maybe next time give yourself a little more time : ).
Hope it is helpful, if not disregard and keep up the good work : )
lynn CC
p..s. if you reshoot them send them to me if you like and i will have a look. |
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| 11/26/2003 10:02:36 AM |
Eat at Tony's, it's the best.by bruskiComment by bruski: I thought that propaganda could be any kind of advertising. Oops. But thanks for the votes that were as high as they were considering I didn't meet the challenge :) |
| 11/25/2003 09:45:31 PM |
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| 11/25/2003 06:12:07 PM |
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| 11/25/2003 01:15:53 AM |
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| 11/22/2003 09:24:09 AM |
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| 11/22/2003 05:07:37 AM |
Eat at Tony's, it's the best.by bruskiComment by willem: Not sure it is propaganda, but it is sure a nice advertising shot. I like the pasta leading the eye into the shot, the balance of red tones composed throught the image, contrasted by the white ingredients. The black at the back is a bit to strong in my opinion, a nice brown tint would have complemented the image better I think. And the bottle should not have been cut at the top. Or maybe getting closer, leaving out more of the black (and cutting of more of the bottle, glass etc.) could have solved it. |
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| 11/21/2003 05:14:17 PM |
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