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| 12/08/2004 06:09:34 PM |
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| 12/08/2004 01:33:21 PM |
WW II Japanese Interment Campby bruskiComment by Imagineer: Challenge link: strong
Image critique: a good rich sky (perhaps a little too burned in places), there's plenty of space and the landmark is very prominent, good contrast, clear and crisp
Out-of-challenge appeal: this is pleasing, so I will probably revisit |
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| 12/08/2004 10:16:09 AM |
WW II Japanese Interment Campby bruskiComment by e301: My first impression is that this lacks something. Good sky, though you seem to have lost control of the brighness of the white in the clouds somewhat. I think my problem is with the tonality of the ground areas - all those greys merge together, there doesn't seem to be much variety of of shade there, and that prevents the buildings fro standing out, tends to merge this into a single landscape, rather than a study of the buildings and the immensity of their location. Great subject, pther than that a great treatment - I like the fact that you seem to have set yourself a real challenge with this shot, and I think you've come close to achieving it - I wonder if a different light would have helped - a lower sun, later in the day. |
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| 12/08/2004 12:14:25 AM |
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| 12/07/2004 03:28:58 PM |
WW II Japanese Interment Campby bruskiComment by bpickard: Nice view, especially the sky, but perhaps too many elements..it might have been stronger with the mountain and just the building with the chimney. Also the land seems to have too little contrast...too much flat grey. |
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| 12/06/2004 09:50:07 PM |
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| 12/06/2004 07:11:22 PM |
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| 12/06/2004 05:46:13 PM |
WW II Japanese Interment Campby bruskiComment by Discraft: The sky is very distracting from the ground. The chimeny doesn't stick out very much. and the ground seems a little distracting to especially the little plants. But overall a nice image. this is just my opinion. |
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| 11/30/2004 06:59:40 PM |
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| 11/30/2004 06:44:17 PM |
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