Evening Chores
by jasonlprice

Comment by pineapple:
Subject matter is perfect. But that filter is really something I might have left out. 6

Evening Chores
by jasonlprice

Comment by digifotojo:
Very nicely composed. Definitey in the tradition of Impressionism. Well done. 8

Evening Chores
by jasonlprice

Comment by aidana:
LOVE IT!

Evening Chores
by jasonlprice

Comment by Hipychik:
I already gave you a 10 earlier but I wanted to tell you how awesome I think this is. Hope you'll share your processing steps after the challenge.

Day 7: The Spider
by jasonlprice

Comment by violinist123:
Crazy detail work on the spider. This is a really good bug shot and the subject works exceedingly well in b/w. I think, by design or error, you actually got a really good dof here. Good detail in the web but under the main subject it goes blurry and doesn't distract the eye. Very nice.

Day 7: The Spider
by jasonlprice

Comment by bs-photos:
Great DOF, you really got alot of detail on his/her body. Very nice shot.

Evening Chores
by jasonlprice

Comment by KaDi:
This has it all! Expertly composed. Wonderfully lit. Pure! Sweet! Emotive!

Evening Chores
by jasonlprice

Comment by HeiSch:
beautiful representation of the topic. you got everything what makes impressionism.

Day 7: The Spider
by jasonlprice

Comment by jasonlprice:

Originally posted by glad2badad: Not sure how you could get more detail in the web

Let me clarify, it is the pattern of the web I didn't like...It is a chaotic web and I wanted a calm web :) LOL. I like the detail. Thanks for the great comment (and thanks to everyone commenting like crazy in this side challenge!)

Edit to add I just went and checked out hajeka's spider and that is the kinda of pattern I wanted. It really draws your eye in torward the subject. I guess I can't change my model's behavior though LOL.

Message edited by author 2007-09-07 10:41:06.

Day 7: The Spider
by jasonlprice

Comment by glad2badad:
Sharp. Very nice detail on the spider. I like the bokeh personally.

Not sure how you could get more detail in the web. The spider and the web are at an angle with the web fading/angling away. You'd have to use a much deeper aperture to get the detail, but then the background would be distracting I think.

Hope your next visit goes well with "her". :)